@grlucas
I have moved my article from the Sandbox to Wikipedia. Here’s the link for your review: Thelma Thompson Slayden - Wikipedia
Randy
Looks good, Randy. Who put the banner there?
Also, you need a lead: a first paragraph that sums up her life. Then, you might put much of your first part into a new section, maybe called “Early life.” There are still some reference errors, too. Thanks.
I had a Summary section and someone removed it. The neutrality banner may have been put there because the summary said she was an extraordinary woman who impacted local and federal legislation.
I’ll check the references again, but it looks like a few people edited it last night. I may need you to tell me what the specific errors are in the citations.
Here are the editors from last night:
